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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2002-02-19 06:27 PM




I’ll give you
the whole length of the playing field
if you give me the same
And we will go about
erecting our walls,
oblivious to each other
I whistling Dixie
you hard at work
So it really doesn’t matter
until one of us nears our goal
And the sad thing
how will we ever know
we’re too busy building walls
And who won?
For the lever retrieves
and the foundation falls

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (02-19-2002 09:14 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-19 06:31 PM


fantastic analogy....and so sad too...excellent Walt
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2 posted 2002-02-19 08:37 PM




(big hugggsssssss) This is so sad and heartfelt, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope all is alright now! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walter, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-02-19 08:39 PM


This was great, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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