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Madly, Truly, Deeply...
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Madly, Truly, Deeply... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Darling, please come to me deny me, no more please hold me close until I am sure secure in this love we've had for so long that begs for it's freedom to sing it's own song hesitate no longer for my soul's afire I yearn for your kiss you're all I desire let me now drown in crystal clear pools of tenderness shown within your pure blues hold me, love me forget this cruel world for you are my man and I am your girl let's pray that they find what we have together a love that's aflame & will be forever so darling, explore with your fingertips all that I am as I kiss your lips take me, if once claim me as your own for you are my love my desire, my home... always... ~Tier{R.T.} 2/18/02 "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wonderful, Tier, wonderful! one of your very best and going in my library!  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, you are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I know you will forever touch the love of your life with your sweet words and you will always feel deeply and lovingly the beauty of eternal love! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Tiersdin the flow in this is wonderful and i love the poem. floria Floria |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think that about covers it!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tiersdin, Beautiful write, enjoyed. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Interloper, Noah, Floria, Sunshine, & Seymour. I appreciate your kind comments! *hugs to you all* ~Tier |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
totally and completely eh Tier??  wonderfully done my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Love this... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Now this...is a love poem! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is absolutely gorgeous, Tier  A beautiful treastise on the music of passion. that begs for it's freedom to sing it's own song hesitate no longer for my soul's afire copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Such sweetness within Don't know were to begin Beautiful, enchantingly and tranquil Thank you for sharing this The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Tier! I especially love the closing lines....perfect finish! -------------------- for you are my love my desire, my home... -------------------- ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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