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Moonlight Romeo
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The heart of you

0 posted 2002-02-19 10:23 AM


Watch now Sunflower
As I give to you the rain
To help your heart grow

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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1 posted 2002-02-19 12:49 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, you write haikus so well, more, more, I LOVE THEM ALL! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may love forever blossom in your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet romeo, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-19 07:08 PM


I LOVE sunflowers so much.  Is this a Haiku (spell?)

Kathleen
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3 posted 2002-02-19 08:51 PM


Moonlight, this is beautiful, I love haiku and you did this so well. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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4 posted 2002-02-20 04:08 PM


this one needs to be seen more. . . yes. . .

and yes, I would qualify this as a haiku. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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5 posted 2002-02-20 04:44 PM


Perfect....


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Dark Angel
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6 posted 2002-02-20 05:12 PM


Ahhh such beauty

Maree

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7 posted 2002-02-20 05:12 PM


nice
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8 posted 2002-02-22 12:59 PM


sunlight behind cloud
gentleman hiding his eyes
sunflower shower

I think this style is infectuous, Dear Romeo


Very much enjoyed yours..


"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

[This message has been edited by Siofra (02-22-2002 12:59 PM).]

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9 posted 2002-02-22 02:14 PM


Sunflowers have always been my favorite flower! Thank you for sharing this Romeo!

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10 posted 2002-02-22 08:09 PM



I'm sure that most here at passions know how much I love sunflowers!  And this is a gorgeous haiku in tribute!

This is a keeper!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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11 posted 2002-02-22 08:21 PM


This one is so sweet, I love it.
Moonlight Romeo
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12 posted 2002-02-25 09:39 AM


The Sunflowers grow
And my heart smiles with great joy
At the thought of you

Thank you all.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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