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Master
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0 posted 2002-02-19 03:22 AM



The game is ending.
It's going to be over
soon.
And now, He has a chance to run the table.
Behind the cue-ball of the moon,
Almighty's staring at the eight-ball.

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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-02-19 03:36 PM


Master,
I like the behind the cue ball of the moon line. Very vivid images of the end game being played.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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2 posted 2002-02-19 10:07 PM


Master~
You are just too cool ... this is wonderful !!!
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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