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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2002-02-18 11:33 PM





Your Strength

I hold your love close
Needing your strength to carry
Me through times of tears
Feeling your love burning strong
Helping me through times of pain




"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home


[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (02-18-2002 11:36 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-18 11:40 PM


a love to carry you through, to be your rock beautiful Tara
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2 posted 2002-02-18 11:42 PM


...Simply beautiful Tara.  Hugs, Nancy...

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

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3 posted 2002-02-18 11:58 PM


This I understand, and it is wonderfully done.

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

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4 posted 2002-02-19 01:08 AM


i will, my dear; i will be here for you whenever you need me.
-Dave, who loves his Tara very much.

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5 posted 2002-02-19 10:03 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo compassionately beautiful, sweet friend, may your love forever give you strength and hope and bring sunshine to your tears! (kis son cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-02-19 02:01 PM


Susan - That is what Dave is for me Thank you.

Nancy - Thank you I'm happy you liked it.

Jenn - I'm glad you understand this

Dave - I know you will, and you know I am always here for you. I love you

Noah - That it does.  Dave doesn't know how much he does for me I'll get the chance to show him one day. Thank you.

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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7 posted 2002-02-20 07:50 PM


I'm a little late replying to this..but..you know I love it! Tankas are so much fun to write, and you say so much with this one!
(hugs)

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8 posted 2002-02-20 07:58 PM


rosepetals25 - and the love will carry you through...

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9 posted 2002-02-20 11:18 PM


Tara - Love can provide us with strength.  Very nice.

Dave

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