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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee 
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You scaled the stones to cast your vision upon my dance By chance that eve the Night was lingerie Perhaps the heels made a difference as you’d never seen anyone beat the drums before with such female distinction as if the skin was only meant for someone tough or burly When the illusion is pearl handled and carved by a strong willed soul the beat can be heard for miles even if by a slender hand penetrating the hardest most undisturbed minds making them sensitive, receptive as the wind through a virgin’s hair as a maiden whose year long wait has just ended with the sound of her sailor’s voice strong behind the hanging wash Even as a man, who just found his heart could truly beat above the sound of his own voice above the distraction in his mind and climb there in homing knowing full the measure that completes the rhythm within me |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Regina-- "as a maiden whose year long wait has just ended with the sound of her sailor’s voice strong behind the hanging wash" You express the with such strong imagery! Wonderful writing here, poet! |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
They do call it "Passions" in Poetry. Well written and expressed. Enjoyed your poem much. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Reg, "knowing full the measure that completes the rhythm within me" And I'm sure he's not telling! Drat. I'm thinking about that cold shower again. Thanks.  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is soooooo beautifully passionate, sweet friend, may all that follows be filled with such beautiful love and enchantment bound to last a lifetime! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
....Beautiful!!.... ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
By chance that eve the Night was lingerie ============================= When the illusion is pearl handled and carved by a strong willed soul =================================== making them sensitive, receptive as the wind through a virgin's hair as a maiden whose year long wait has just ended with the sound of her sailor's voice strong behind the hanging wash ==================================== so many clever metaphors and analogies... so many unique lines and images.... classic Reggie poetry. so good to see you back poetess groovy "Our scientific power has outrun our spiritual power. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rwood, A unique palette of color. Sort of hypnotizes the reader.  |
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Kathleen Junior Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 20Indiana |
you are an inspiration, thank you for this gem. I can't seem to write squat these days and I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed this. Kathleen |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
the sin of a sailor on his wicked sea tossed in passion he dances to the whispers of siren song you did well ms wood |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Lady, work those words! My goodness, such visions, and I can't even write them here LOL, great my friend, just great. Live today like it was your last day on earth! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
rwood~ You have a magic touch about you, it shows....lovely work.... Lauren~ Step through the |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
By necessity: *BUMP* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Larry is such a good guy to bump this back up...he knew I hadn't seen it... and now I have! Thank you Regina...[thanks, Larry!] |
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