I Bring the Sun (My First Haiku)

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Open Poetry #19

I Bring the Sun (My First Haiku)

Moonlight Romeo

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since 2001-09-10

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The heart of you

0 posted 2002-02-18 10:32 AM

I bring the sun love
To touch your petals softer
Remember my love

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2002-02-18 10:36 AM

No better gift...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-02-18 10:39 AM

Romeo,
Good one, enjoyed.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2002-02-18 10:48 AM

Love is your domain
words of wine and roses sung
Juliet is blessed

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2002-02-18 12:02 PM

romantic and beautiful

Siofra

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since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

5 posted 2002-02-18 01:45 PM

and you do it so well...

both writing and loving, I'm sure.

This is beautiful, Dear.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-02-18 09:43 PM

(smiles) Awwwwww, you are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may the sun of love forever rise in your heart and hers and shine with a true love bound to last forever! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2002-02-18 10:34 PM

You've sure impressed me!

Well done, this is lovely!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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