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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2002-04-02 07:35 AM


A feeling so alone of late
does anyone know of my fate?
And if they do, well do they care?
I feel I'm hanging lone out there.

For such grief will not sublimate
regardless of the time I wait.
And loving lost still hurts like hell
Although by now I should be well.

Even my family seems dense
or else they're better at pretense
Just carry on, it's over now
But no one ever told me how....


© Copyright 2002 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Rick
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1 posted 2002-04-02 08:02 AM


The feeling all alone takes on many faces and situations, it is amazing how strong the inner self can be, many tears are cried within through good relationships and the otherwise, lonely hearts are all around us, searching for love, craving for company.
It's hard to carry on through change, but we must, your heart will meet another and rejoyce, your long days will pass and all will be great once more. I hope they will for you.

Enjoyed the read.

Sincerely Rick

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2 posted 2002-04-02 08:20 AM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Sandra, I'm so very sorry you've had to go through so much, my heart goes out to you and it saddens me to see those who are closest to you not encouraging you like they should! (kiss on cheek) Hang in there, sweet friend, very soon someone is bound to find you and offer you all your heart deserves and desires so much and make sure you are safe and comfortable always! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sad but beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-04-02 09:08 AM


No one ever tells us how..... we learn it is one step and one second at a time.... trying and hoping we will learn enough in this one or the next to carry us on...

nicely said.

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2002-04-02 09:22 AM


just a place
on the sand
where our feet leave prints
unfamiliar

we will see tomorrow
is washed clean
another day to walk
and leave prints
unfamiliar

it is a blessing they say

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with you
5 posted 2002-04-02 09:52 AM


"And loving lost still hurts like hell
Although by now I should be well.

Even my family seems dense
or else they're better at pretense
Just carry on, it's over now
But no one ever told me how...."


I know this. Too well. Yes...
touching deep here...very emotional write, and read...thank you

Silver Streak
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6 posted 2002-04-02 11:49 AM


I care, Sandra!

((Sandra))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2002-04-02 11:53 AM


The time span of recovery is different for everyone.  Yours will come to an end, I promise

waiting can be hard
no insruction book given
except the Bible

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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The heart of you
8 posted 2002-04-02 12:55 PM


Start at the beginning, and go from there.  You'll know when you've reached the end.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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9 posted 2002-04-02 01:31 PM


Sometimes Sandra, mothers wear a happy face for their children, so they have no idea the hurt and mostly loneliness she faces as she gets older..just simply oblivious to it..hugs

             ~Victoria

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10 posted 2002-04-02 01:33 PM


Feelings I know so well,

thanks for sharing

(((warm hugs)))
Charisma

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11 posted 2002-04-02 01:34 PM


I can feel this Sandra, reaching from such a deep emotion.....and ending up in a beautiful write.  Hugs hon, and I CARE TOO!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Verve
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12 posted 2002-04-02 02:21 PM




This brought back bittersweet thoughts for me ... ...

Perhaps Time may not heal all wounds ... maybe not entirely ... but the pain shall ease ...

I pray that this shall pass soon ...

Take care



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In Your Poetic Mind
13 posted 2002-04-02 04:25 PM


Sandra~

I know this feeling all too well....wishing peace for you...and brighter days of happy times....

Lauren~

~Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into th

JamesMichael
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14 posted 2002-04-02 04:30 PM


At times when I believed that no one cared for me I found that I was able to believe that my heavenly Father believed in me and cared for me...and in time we will find the friends we need to feel connected and accepted to those that will honestly care for us...James
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