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The Dance
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The Dance |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Aglaia sings her songs on high, In passion's dance, we cross night's sky, I hold you close, our bodies pressed, I feel your warmth, your heart my quest, A tender kiss upon your brow, As to my Rose, my love avow, Round and round, as one we dance, I feel sweet pain, of Eros' lance, With Seven Sisters as night's choir, We'll dance the rhythm of our desire, Our waltz beneath the Southern Cross, As on my heart, your love emboss, We'll dance as one, forevermore, You are my Rose, my life's adore. |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Each poem of yours is a dance of words, Tim.  sky |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent!...all I can say is..... Dance me to the end of love....dance me. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Tim--To be your Rose and the subject of so many beautiful, love filled poems, would indeed be wonderful! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
A lovely poem this is. I enjoyed reading it. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Beautiful write...just remember though...every rose has it's thorn!! Just kiddin' and thinkin' out loud!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Everything about this--the flow and sweep of words, the mythological references, IS a dance. And you are so light on your feet! (It just so happens I've an empty spot on my dance card!)  Magical writing... |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This is beautiful...... Connie |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You're on a roll today...you can tumble some more of these right before our eyes...I'm in the mood to read all the good stuff... |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
i love it! i love it! you really make it feel like you are dancing moniqu |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
*sigh* Breathless, here again, Tim! *sigh*  *now where did I put that oxygen tank?*  |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Tim, this makes me want to slow dance with someone special. Your Rose is a lucky girl. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Another one for Connie... What a lucky lady.. Nice one, Tim...  |
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Accordionmaid Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 153MA/USA |
lovely! Makes me want to dance. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Enjoy the dance, well done Tim  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I enjoyed this one Tim..nicely done as always ~Victoria "Mistakes are the portals of discovery." |
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