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When I.... Hear, Feel, See
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When I.... Hear, Feel, See |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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When I.... Hear, Feel, See When I hear you breathe my name It calls to my heart to start the flame The fire that smoulders here deep inside Fades away and I think its died But when you’re near it burns again A raging fire a dancing flame I come alive at the sound of you The heat ignites spreading all through When I feel the touch of your hand It drives away troubles I understand Questions that bemuse and worry me Disappear into nothing I feel certainty Answers that illumine my soul Appear I’m made completely whole I am bathed in light when you are near I’m free with nothing to ever fear When I see your eyes roam over me I’m blessed by the desire that I see The feelings that I’ll lose your touch Or that you’ll not need me quite so much Vanish when I look deep in your eyes Or hear your satisfied tender sighs I can only say that when I see you I know I’m loved all the way through Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) This is a wonderful five-senses reeling declaration of love, sweet friend, may you always see your love and may he always hear your sighs and feel for you with trust and a warm smile always! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Utterly superbly written dear Mushy... Like this one...way to go girl! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I can only say that when I see you I know I’m loved all the way through'' Oh Marsha dear girl, this is most enchanting... enjoyed this very much....Lauren~ ~Greeneyes~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautifully hot Marsha... A romantic one, fresh out of the oven of love.  ~lots and lots of huggggssss~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Marsha, darling girl, this is a magnificent poem, one of your very, very best. And you know that I adore your sweet words of honey, your lovely majestic poetic rays of bright sunshine, piercing deep into my very soul, healing me and making me whole. And it's true: "I can only say that when I see you I know I’m loved all the way through" but let me add: "I can only say when I read your words I taste the finest honey, ever heard". I love you, Mushy, xo ((Marsha)) Newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Marsha, this has to be one of your best! If not THE best! Just super and enjoyed so much! ~Happy Easter & Bunny Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marsha love, you can write when you're in pain singing love in sweet refrain you could write without a care that's why I'd read you anywhere. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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