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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-02-17 08:14 PM


Queen Anne's Lace
By: Noah Eaton
2/17/02

O' majesty of my beating heart
From behind the sunlight's portiere
I will queen you, my lovely lady
We'll dance barefoot in slow tango on this belvedere

We'll suckle the flavor of this souchong night
Breathe the nectar of the crocus moon
We'll share a love affair filled with simple luxuries
I'll carry you in my arms in the breast of this fevered honeymoon

How doth the honeybees knead their honey?
How doth the geese know which way is south?
Ever since you took me for a ride on passions whirligig
I have felt young again, you have given me loves gift now

I'll sow your heart in macrame promises
For you are my love, you are my goddess
Your love is as soft and rare as Queen Anne's Lace
Flowering in the midst of springs misty kiss

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-17-2002 08:15 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-17 08:19 PM


enjoyed
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2 posted 2002-02-17 08:20 PM


Sheer Elegance!!  Absolutely marvellous!!
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3 posted 2002-02-17 08:46 PM


Noah,
Queen Ann lace is not rare but your poetry is

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4 posted 2002-02-17 10:22 PM


This is so beautiful, Noah.


I think its the very best I have seen from you and thats saying an awful lot, because all of your poems are so excellent.

How doth the honeybees knead their honey?
How doth the geese know which way is south?
Ever since you took me for a ride on passions whirligig

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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5 posted 2002-02-22 01:55 AM


Excellent writing Noah...James
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6 posted 2002-02-22 07:45 AM


words straith from a loving heart. Beautiful piece Noah!

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7 posted 2002-02-22 08:31 AM


noah...how beautiful...as your words embrace...they make lace...helen
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8 posted 2002-02-22 08:51 AM


So I take it ... you're in love

Excellent writing

[This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (02-23-2002 11:04 AM).]

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9 posted 2002-02-22 09:43 AM


Noah, Such a soft, romantic read to enjoy with my morning coffee....thankyou. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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10 posted 2002-02-22 09:58 AM


Beautiful words Noah...i loved this..you romantic soul you ha.. hugss

          ~Vic

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11 posted 2002-02-22 07:15 PM


So sweetly romantic and special. Like Queen Anne's Lace
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12 posted 2002-02-22 07:30 PM


Beautiful words Noah, nicely done...
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