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Open Poetry #19

The Playground of the Sun

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2002-03-28 10:37 PM

Her heart has been touched
by the surgeon of his voice
like a rainbow
within the playground
of the sun
skipping through
puddles of yesterday
swinging over a river
to riverbanks of love
softly tripping upon life
upon smiles of faith
awakening
to a picnic of brand new
Her heart has been touched
by the transfusion of love
seeping into her veins
drifting like gardenias
into the sunlight of his arms

"If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare)

[This message has been edited by Victoria (03-28-2002 11:43 PM).]

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

1 posted 2002-03-28 10:38 PM

Very beautiful, Victoria...

skipping through
puddles of yesterday
swinging over a river
to riverbanks of love
softly tripping upon life
upon smiles of faith

~hugs~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2002-03-28 10:39 PM

So many wonderful lines here, the rhythm of romance. ThisDiamond

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

3 posted 2002-03-28 10:40 PM

The imagery in this is beautiful!

sky

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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-03-28 10:42 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, may everyday be like recess to you and may loves laughter always fill your heart everyday! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words are pure sunshine! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2002-03-28 10:47 PM

Loved the way you made this shine Victoria!
The warmth or your words radiate with a passion!!

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2002-03-28 11:46 PM

thank you guys and gals...and for peeking in as always..

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