Today I gave u my heart...

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Open Poetry #19

Today I gave u my heart...

TriXter
Member

since 2002-03-20

Posts 112
The One

0 posted 2002-03-27 06:50 PM

Today i did what i thought i couldnot
I Would slip u my poem at break afterrnoon, or so i thought.
But somone ruined my plan, somone stayed behind,
so four hours i thought of ways,so my poem, you would find.

I decided to follow, but not be a stalker,
and slip the note afterschool, up into youre locker.
I did just that, but thought i got the wrong locker too.
but i knew it was youres, and I dont know what you'll do.

Will u find out That it is I who sent the letter,
If you do, and you smile, my heart will feel better.
For now my heart is beating 50 beats a second.

When u find it tommorrow, will she sit there and think,
Or are my words not strong enough, Do they just go down the sink.
I sent you "star gazer" whitch was stright from my soul,
Explaning how youre touch,youre smile, You...make me whole.

I think im in love, But i do not know how,
Will i know how she feels? I want to know now.
But I must wait, at least until tommorrow,
If you do not feel the same, I will only feel sorrow.

Will you be mine? Will you be with me?
Tommorrow,Tommorrow, this we will see.

[This message has been edited by TriXter (03-27-2002 06:58 PM).]

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2002-03-27 06:57 PM

I decided to follow, but not be a stalker,
and slip the note afterschool, up into youre locker.
I did just that, but thought i got the wrong locker too.
but i knew it was youres, and I dont know what you'll do.

It just get's ya all churned up. I really liked your poem.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

2 posted 2002-03-27 08:05 PM

welcome to passions

enjoyed

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-27 08:18 PM

(smiles) I hope she answers your hearts yearning with loves true declaration, sweet friend, this is a powerful poem and I wish you and her the greatest happiness together! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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