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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Repost: Happiness Happiness flows in little drops, From candy sweet to ice cream pops Making snowballs and sand piles. Or laughing tears or pleasant wiles. Happiness flows in tacit turns From smiling inlets and return Meeting friends in common explore. Some people comming through the door Happiness is El Do-ra-do Or the sighting of a rainbow A moment on a traveling tour. The fulfillment of a brochure. Happiness is a birthday cake A candle blown a wish you make The gaining of another year. And to some just an ice cold beer. The comfort of the place you are Or just a light beam from a star. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
so well spoken Sy..perfect view |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Smiled all the way through it  I'd gladly read ones like this all day |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The comfort of the place you are Or just a light beam from a star. ============================== Which applies to your poetry on both counts... comfort and light...you are my star. and me winkie stinky  *L*  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
The comfort of the place you are so very true, Sy *s M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger, Thank you. Rex, Happy smiling. JM,  Maureen, Thank you sweet. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This encompasses all of the smiles, Sy...from that of a newborn babe to its mother's face, to that of an old gent warming his bones in the sun...from the hand of a child on a pup's head...to the visit at the graveside, remembering a loved one's good deeds.... yes, Sir, it encompassed it all! Enjoy the brew! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sy, your writing always makes me happy and this one is no exception to that rule |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Thank you sweet. Interloper, Always happy the leave a smile. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Or the sighting of a rainbow A moment on a traveling tour. The fulfillment of a brochure. splendid~~~ It's so simple really!! I love what you wrote Mr. Tabin! |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Seymour hi there I really do love this one, Happiness is seeing your writing, having a poem that promotes a smile deep in the spirit of my soul, which this did, This is a beautiful poem etched in gold in your wonderful heart, I love it. There is such a warmth and a serenity about your writing it is excellent  Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How very beautiful, Seymour. *S* Now if only happiness wasn't fleeting... that beer bottle keeps coming up empty? *S* Well done! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I like the run through on the sources of a smile, thanks Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BlueSerenade, Yes it is and thank you. Krissy, Thank you sweet, Suthern, Thank you for the well done. Ecrivan, You welcome and thank you. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy this is simply outstanding writing. Again flawless and perfectly presented. What can I say but this is exceptional. YOU always write brilliantly and today is no exception. Wonderful flow and rhythm, as you seem to always do you’ve painted the picture to PERFECTION. You write so wonderfully, and YOU have described Happiness so well, the only thing it misses is the warm good feeling I get from you and your writing. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, Your comment is happiness. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
awwwww SY! This poem has just put me in such an upbeat, happy mood! Thank u my friend (hugs) |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Happiness is a birthday cake A candle blown a wish you make The gaining of another year. And to some just an ice cold beer. AMEN to this one, Sy! especially the birthday cake. One of my favorite foods is cake icing.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RosePetal, Always glad to leave a smile. Lyra, Me too, |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sy, this was just so sweet..it made me smile. your work always has such a lovely quality about it, thanks for posting this my friend! take care. amy "you can't stop |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Aimster, If it brought a smile, I'm happy. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Your gorgeous words alays bring smiles to all our faces, sweet friend, this made e feel so very happy just as we all wish you the greatest happiness from all our hearts! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is enjoyable! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Sy...life is so full of simple pleasures if we would only take the time to enjoy each and every one in it's moment. Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Noah. Enchantress, You are right, glad you liked it. |
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