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Am I Old Enough
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Am I Old Enough |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Now I've done it again I made a dicision all by myself But you don't like what I've decided..your tone told me so I feel guilty for what my mind said I could do without any help At my age do I have to ask may I..then you let me know My mood is black my mind says its time I can rebel I can decide to do my own thing even if others can't see why You may wish I did as you thought and are ready to tell But I'm guilty of letting others influence the way I live my life by I am going to do it my way what ever blows my hair back I may not even tell you my plans just do my own thing Come or go day or night you'll know I'm home when I un-pack Let me be grown up and know this will happen every Spring Boy am I glad I got that off my chest and it's out in the open Growing up isn't the same as growing old each faced with fear I then have questions wonder if this is how it feels to win And look out to see a Butterfly wipe away a little tear Not sure I want to win |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Yes, never let anyone decidce the fate of your future, you alone deserve to make your own choices for its our own dreams that make us special and you should never be pressured by others! (big hugggsssss) This is emotionally powerful, sweet friedn, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Thank you, Noah |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
M_E, Does this mean you decided to come back? I'm thrilled to see you here and glad you found your independence. You go girl...just don't cut off your nose to spite your face! LOL  |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Well, Larry, I am old but not overly smart. I hope to keep my nose where it belongs. Glad to be here, ME |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
and i just may start eating my dessert before my dinner from now on too...welcome back...helen |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Helen, thank you. If it isn't one of the kids or grand kids, it is my husband! Some days I just want to sit in a puddle and throw mud at them ALL! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
when aren't we old enough?? wonderful my friend. . . good to see you back. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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inspiredpoetwriter Member
since 2002-01-05
Posts 104Minnesota |
Hey good poem i could never write ne thing ike tat SMILES :) keep it up! good work! Luv Care ;) :p :) ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥ |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
ME...let me say, I understand. Here's a Kleenex. Good write. Write more. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You won with this piece Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Sven, inspiredpoetwriter, Soleil Noir, Interloper, I thank y'all for the kind words and the use of the Kleenex. I haven't been gone just in the Corner Pub. Love the quiet. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MotherEarth~ Good to see you peek into Open~ Nice affirmatively emoted piece~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Thank you Marge. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
nice exclamation of independence!  |
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