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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-03-24 03:55 PM


Into The Heart Of Me

I took a journey into the heart of me
Passed all the landmarks of my destiny
I visited those battlefields scarred and sore
Realised that they can’t hurt me anymore
Banished those ghosts that haunted me
Sent them away mercilessly
I’ve touched again my treasures of time
Settled my accounts and know I’m fine

I wandered those paths of my memory
To those places deep inside of me
Faced every demon that had haunted me
Emerged from each battle victoriously
Plunged the sword of truth into my heart
Accepted that sometimes love will depart
Now I’ve uncovered the inner complexity
And I think I like the whole of me

I’ve roamed labyrinthine ways of soul
Found the leak and plugged the hole
Within my heart I’ve learnt to be
Opened my wings to soar high and free
Taken advice of self and understand
How important it is to offer my hand
Found peace that I thought was gone
Now in my journey I’ll be moving on

Marsha



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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Victoria
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1 posted 2002-03-24 03:59 PM


Plunged the sword of truth into my heart

i wish i had said that line ha..great line and Congratulations Marsha..

           ~Victoria

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2 posted 2002-03-24 04:06 PM




BRAVO!!! YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, yes, yes, you are a true delight to us all and we are all sooooooo proud of you and always being the loving person you are! (kiss on cheek) Never change who you are, sweet friend, and always hold your dreams close on your lifes journey, we are all sooooooo proud of you and love you so much, CONGRATULATIONS ON 5000!!! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous, I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Dulcinea
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3 posted 2002-03-24 05:24 PM


Marvelous! I enjoyed the theme and the flow of this one Marsha! Way to go! and Congrats on making 5000!!!

strbbux
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4 posted 2002-03-24 05:31 PM


Marsha my dear girl, this is your best by far. How wonderful are your words.

"Faced every demon that had haunted me
Emerged from each battle victoriously
Plunged the sword of truth into my heart
Accepted that sometimes love will depart
Now I’ve uncovered the inner complexity
And I think I like the whole of me"

Do not ever tell me that you are not a poet. I will not stand for it. and CONGRATULATIONS
ON YOUR 5000... How wonderful and how lucky we all are to have you here. floria


Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

catalinamoon
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5 posted 2002-03-24 05:50 PM


Marsha, how did you accomplish all those things?
Congrats on your posts, and the wisdom and beauty of your words.
Sandra

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6 posted 2002-03-24 06:15 PM


It is always a treat to read poetry of a
person who has/is coming to terms with their
inner self...  

Utterly awesome and fantabulous Mushy!!

Congrats on this milestone in your life and
your poetry..

Sunshine
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7 posted 2002-03-24 06:23 PM



This is Marsha...unplugged.  Brevity of the soul, which I know for you, dear, is not easy, but oh so much more explosive than you will ever know!  How proud I am of you for your growth in poetry!  How much more proud I am to call you...friend!  Warm hugs...K

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2002-03-24 06:26 PM


Marsha,
Your poetry is a delight to read. And I enjoy the way rhyme.

Madame Chipmunk
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9 posted 2002-03-24 07:38 PM



My dearest friend, Marsha...congratulations on your 5000th post
and also on finding your true inner beautiful self....
I guess this has been quite the month for you.
Two wonderful accomplishements!
Quite frankly....I am sitting here, quite green with envy
~huggggsssss~

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2002-03-24 08:13 PM


"Plunged the sword of truth into my heart.
Accepted that sometimes love will depart."
Fabulous expression Marsha...James

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11 posted 2002-03-24 08:21 PM


MarshaLoveSisterOfSoul~
And ... it seems like yesterday~

Your poetry has 'grown' in direct proportion to the size of your heart~
Sooooooo, reckon that makes this one MEGAMARSHAMONGOUS~

Have you EVER known me to be shorter ?
Tee-Hee .... 5'2" and my feet touch the floor ! !

Love you gal ... for OVER 5000 reasons to *smile*~
*HUGS*
~*MargeInSisterSoul*~


***Just cause I got 3 more to use~***

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

RosePetal
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12 posted 2002-03-24 08:22 PM


congrats!!! Marsha, you always rhyme so perfectly, I am a rhymer too, so I love that.
Keep the lovely poems coming and I will always be glad to read them.
Thank you for 5,000 enjoyable poems darling girl!

Aimster
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13 posted 2002-03-24 09:33 PM


marsha,

dearest sis of my heart...but what do i
say to such a stunning gorgeous write! you
know how i feel about you, and how much i've
come to love and care about you. you are
such an amazing woman with a strength and
gift that i honestly don't think you see
yourself having. thank you for everything
you've done for me and shared with me over
the past year...congratulations on your 5000th. i look forward to reading many many
more from your pen. still after all this
time of knowing you, you hold me in awe
and wonder. you will forever have my
respect and my admiration. take care! speak to you soon sweets.



love you!
Amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do

Balladeer
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14 posted 2002-03-24 09:58 PM


Well, mushy lady, what can I say? It seems like only yesterday you were a three-digit gal and look at you now...halfway to five digits!! Where does the time go? It goes in 5000 haertfelt poems and comments that you have blessed us with in your own unique vivacious style....congratulations, dear lady!
Tracey
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15 posted 2002-03-24 10:46 PM


This is a beautiful poem to commemorate your 5,000 Marsha. Congratulations on the milestone, and the poetry.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

BluesSerenade
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16 posted 2002-03-25 02:01 AM


I’ve roamed labyrinthine ways of soul
Found the leak and plugged the hole
Within my heart I’ve learnt to be

Loved your poem, especially those lines.

It is there where we live in the heart of ourselves, that precious place in which we dwell. Congrats on your 5000th post, you've a wonderful talent Marsha and it seems apporpriate to tell you one more time...(drum roll)
It's your zest that I admire most!!  

It is!!!!

RavenSnow
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17 posted 2002-03-25 07:40 AM


A beautifully written and soulfully insightful post, Marsha. I can't pick a favorite section, as the whole poem is excellent. Congratulations one the big 5000.

RS

"A conspiracy of silence speaks louder than words."
Dr. Winston O'Boogie

Kethry
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18 posted 2002-03-27 05:30 AM


Marsha,
Hey you've hit the big five oh, oh-oh
tell me that's the way to go
I'm so young I wouldn't know
and your words can move me so.

Cleansed in every part of  thee
mayhap someone has set you free
I hope to heaven that it is me
to join thee in thine victory

Five thousand now I'm feeling old
at the stories left untold
and all the words penned brave and bold
on your work you know I'm sold.

Here's to 5000 more!

(((((((Marsha)))))))
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Verve
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19 posted 2002-03-27 05:38 AM



Hi Marsha ...

This is most beautiful ... Someday I hope to be able to exorcise all the demons in my past too.
I love this piece ... and congrats on the 5000 with such a masterpiece.


Paula Finn
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20 posted 2002-03-27 10:05 PM


"And I think I like the whole of me"
I very much like the whole of you sister mine...congrats on 5000


Enchantress
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21 posted 2002-03-27 10:25 PM


CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR 5000TH POST!!!
AND A WONDERFULLY MARVELOUS POEM TO MARK THIS MILESTONE!
Beautifully done Mushy Darling Girl!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

ecrivan
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22 posted 2002-03-27 11:20 PM


COngrads at breaking the 5000 limit!!


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