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Open Poetry #19

Icarus

Streen
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since 2001-11-28

Posts 169

0 posted 2002-03-23 11:03 PM

Honestly, I tell
you that if you

were not to be
then I

would sink into the ocean,
a feathery grave because I

would huddle close to the sun.

That would be the closest thing
to sailing the breezes with you,

where proximity
leaves my heart melted.

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 2002-03-23 11:14 PM

Very clever, tying the legend of Icarus into your thoughts of feelings for your love...I like it!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-23 11:17 PM

WOW!!! This is a wonderful double-edged sword poem, sweet friend, your thoughts of love tie in wonderfully with this legend! (big hugggssssss) we all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Derek, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-03-24 10:02 PM

This is wonderful! I like the way your imagination works!

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