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Sachet Memories |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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I wear faintly the bare essence of you sachet memories of eyes sapphire blue upon my satin pillow in the night floating aimlessly like a willowy kite whispers bathe upon my earlobe whispering passion beneath moonlight's globe I feel your fingers in tassels of hair the shadow of you still scenting the air I taste sweetly your kiss upon my lips your kiss still blooming like violet tulips my love still haunting the tears in my eyes still teasing upon the shores of good bye hid within eternal yesterdays sighs the question still lingers,the question why?
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Very lovely, Victoria. Yes, and also sad. *hugs*  Stars will shine when I am gone |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Victoria...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Vic, you paint masterfully a poem of love and sadness... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Michael..glad you liked james..thank you for peeking in thank you..barry..so nice of you to say.. |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
no answer for 'why's', no lace tissue for soul-stealing cries follow your own devotion lead from a path of emotion for if you cannot forget a thing your soul won't let then surely spirit-fed kisses are a heart's lavender lotion Never a disappointment, reading you is one of my greatest pleasures! Jeff |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Victoria, this is soooooo gorgeous but so sad too, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and the sad memories you feel and I pray that now true love overshadows your grief and has filled your heart with flowery bliss! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your poetry is as lovely as always, I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautfiul heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I feel your fingers in tassels of hair the shadow of you still scenting the air I taste sweetly your kiss upon my lips your kiss still blooming like violet tulips Beautiful imagery here, Victoria. ~hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I felt the bittersweetness in this poem of yours. I also read them with a quiet acceptance of better days gone by. Hugs to you Victoria~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you lori..i love bittersweet poetry whether i write it or someone else writes it...glad you enjoyed ..hugs ~Victoria
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful, you know I relate. This part especially "my love still haunting the tears in my eyes still teasing upon the shores of good bye hid within eternal yesterdays sighs the question still lingers,the question why?" Sandra |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: Yes, those are indeed the BEST lines... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you jeff appreciate your kind words thank you noah..as aways.. thank you lyra..glad you enjoyed sweet lady hugs thank you sandra..i know you can relate hugss thank you sunshine...thanks for peeking in hugs |
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