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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-02-17 01:59 PM


This is to my children...and all children...a
reminder of how precious they are...

Little lives precious and dear
sometimes caught in daily fear
Wanting love to carry them all
in comfort and keep from a fall

Children so much a dear part
of our lives and in our heart
Wanting the simplest of things
nothing fancy, no golden rings

Taking from us what we give
all the wonders of how to live
Feeling our words and touch
needing a little love so much.

Take a child into your arms
and wash away hurts or harms
Give each a hug every morning
as they are little lives growing

It is short...but the message is there..

© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-17 02:02 PM


Oh my gosh...this poem made me call Erin and give her a big hug...*sigh* I will be visiting some of my grandchildren tonight and will remember this poem and give them tons of love...Thank you, Barry...you have touched my heart...this poem is beautiful...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2002-02-17 02:03 PM




(big hugggggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is sooooooo beautiful, this brought a tear to my eye reading this to envision you holding your children close as they laughed and hugged you in delight, so happy and lucky to have such a loving and compassionate daddy like you! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may all your kids grow up and share their love to all just as you do, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-02-17 02:56 PM


Good writing Magnus...James
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4 posted 2002-02-17 03:09 PM


i love children...and they are so lovable
even when they are bad ha..looking forward to holding my new grandchild in August when it is born..nicely done barry..

           ~Vic

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5 posted 2002-02-17 03:13 PM


Beautiful write straight from your heart Barry!  And very very true.  Enjoyed so much today!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me~

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6 posted 2002-02-17 03:14 PM


Barry; You have said some very important things in this poem.  Children do take what we give them; oftimes, they deserve so much more then they get.  One thing we know, they can never receive too much love.  Wonderful poem.  Wanda
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7 posted 2002-02-17 03:18 PM


Magnus,
Good write, enjoyed.

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8 posted 2002-02-17 03:19 PM



Yesterday while walking with my granddaughter...I snuggled down to her and whispered "Grandma loves you!"...and she asked, "why do you whisper?"  I said "because I wanted you to know!" Then she yelled, "My Grandma LOVES ME!".....

and I wondered...why didn't I?

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9 posted 2002-02-17 03:24 PM


Magnus,
Great advice Great poem!

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10 posted 2002-02-17 03:37 PM


awww barry! I love children too that is why I took childcare courses and am now certified to work in preschool and daycare.
children really are precious!! I can't wait to have some of my own someday

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11 posted 2002-02-17 06:45 PM


Perfect,Barry. I so agree. I  am hugging my litle granddaughter right now.
Sandra

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12 posted 2002-02-17 08:11 PM


so totally completely dependant on us..... they are not ours... God just allows us to treasure them, teach them Love and kindness, and be their gaurdians until we release them to fly on their own...

"little" lives so BIG..... a tremendous gift for such an honor we have and a duty ...

thank you for this poem. It is wonderful.

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13 posted 2002-02-17 08:16 PM


enjoy your read
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14 posted 2002-02-17 08:33 PM


Hello Barry

Such an important message you have given us here.  I guess some of us take things for granted but all our lives are so very precious and can be taken away without a moments notice.  We should cherish each day and fill our lives with love.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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15 posted 2002-02-17 08:34 PM


WOW...

everyone has said what I would say.

Lovely..

Bill Charles
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16 posted 2002-02-17 08:43 PM


Barry - message well said, and yes, they are most precious...

BC

Magnus
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17 posted 2002-02-17 09:10 PM


Thank you...each of you..for your kind
thoughts....May we all never forget our
children and their needs...

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18 posted 2002-02-17 09:46 PM


Magnus, You have touched my heart dear man, For I absolutely adore children and would defend them with my life. This is so loving, and caring, beautiful poem. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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