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Open Poetry #19

Outro (about a girl)

jaded
Junior Member

since 2001-07-24

Posts 20

0 posted 2002-03-23 05:32 PM

Outro

She - she brings out the best in me,
I know that I want to be,
Just by her side.

With you – the sun shines so easily,
And it’s just so hard for me,
To say ‘goodbye’.

She’s got a smile worth a thousand sunsets, every morning,
She makes it worth getting up and getting out there,
And I know, when I look into her eyes
I feel a flame in me deep inside.

I’ll watch her, spring blooms around me, In the middle of winter,
In the muted surroundings, all I heard was her
Never chain you down, I’d always set you free,
Just to see you smiling back at me.

I can feel your name spoken softly on the breeze
Through the ruffled feathers of a passing bird
The space between me and you could be further
As we grew closer.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-23 05:38 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I hope that you find her and share a lifetime of happiness with her and share every sunrise and sunset happily! (big hugggsssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautfiul heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2002-03-23 06:44 PM

"I can feel your name spoken softly on the breeze
Through the ruffled feathers of a passing bird"
That is really a nice image. Well done, jaded.

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