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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-03-23 05:23 PM






Caramel Sunset
By: Noah Eaton
3/23/02

I trace each texture and line of your face
Caressing the hair from your ear back in ocean waves
The heavens bask through the periwinkle sgraffito ceiling
Simpering with honeyed horizons of mushy unconditional passion

In this moment karma is obsolete, fate is overrated
Softly sunburned in the lips of the Sun
Warbling like Eros and Psyche against sexy tropical punch canvas
Earth, wind, and fire balming us in loves sacred dance

Together we soak up the sun, wearing your flesh upon mine
My heart beating with yours, echoing laughter to each other
Carrying you as close to the heavens as I can
Tasting the peach-and-cream colors of our loves divinity

Softly I lick the butterscotch sweetness of your lips
Kissing you as the sun is in proportion to the both of us
Matchmade together, soulmates embraced in this caramel sunset, God our wedding host
We're two angels with one destiny, condemned together forever more...
Melting in heavenly afterglow
Into each other...

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-23-2002 06:09 PM).]

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Zinsser
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1 posted 2002-03-23 05:39 PM


Together we soak up the sun, wearing your flesh upon mine
My heart beating with yours, echoing laughter to each other
Carrying you as close to the heavens as I can
Tasting the peach-and-cream colors of our loves divinity
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
beautiful.....
~~Connie~~

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2 posted 2002-03-23 06:50 PM


Noah...Another gorgeous poem with exquisite poetic language.  Nobody puts words together better than you when it comes to passions.

***Ivy Rose

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3 posted 2002-03-23 06:56 PM


Caramel kisses, how tasty and sweet. Noah, you always come up with a honeyed treat for us.
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4 posted 2002-03-23 09:13 PM


Beautiful.
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5 posted 2002-03-28 06:54 PM


Noah~

I love this....wow sweet friend....you are so soft and so romantic....


Lauren~

~Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into th

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6 posted 2002-03-28 07:39 PM


Noah...your writing just gets better and better.  Love this one!  Hugs to you sweetie!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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