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Eyes Communication
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Eyes Communication |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Eyes Communication Your eyes of sighs Flick over Then under to sunder The connection of self Heat seems to meet No resistance of me Left floating in warmth of Desires fire Your touch of such Spins lines of fine Connection or sense Between you and I Feel the touch reach out To caress with thought The skin of sin Which unfurls To curl In tendrils of Sensation Your find of mind Evokes to call my fall Into dews of hues Rainbow’s streak Across the sky of me Who seeks to be Connected to The hue of you In touch by Eyes not in disguise Reflection All from your glance That seemed by chance To touch with much Delicate trace of face Before your lips Bore words of this Asking for more Permission Hopes to advance The connection Spun into Silent Communication Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
I love this Krissy, "the hues of you" lovely words you use here, I like how your mind works and the roads it travels. lovely poem. floria Floria |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KrissyKrissyKrissy~ 'Your find of mind Evokes to call my fall Into dews of hues Rainbow’s streak Across the sky of me Who seeks to be Connected to The hue of you In touch by Eyes not in disguise Reflection' Girlie, girl ... this is EXQUISITE poetry~ You've certainly developed a distinctively unique style ... all your own. Just beautiful~ *HUGS*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
wow, I love the imagery you've used in here such as the "rainbow's streak" Brilliant work Krissy! (hugs)  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
krissy, i think this is prob your finest write. your inner rhyming was perfection, and your message here wonderful! you have an amazing talent my sweets. take care. amy "you can't stop |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Krissy! I think you found your niche in the poetry world! This is outstanding and lovely! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is such a beautifully rambling romantic thought, sweet friend, may his eyes forever speak true loves song to you and shine always with the radiance of pure love your heart desires! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krissy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Krissy, you write with the pen of an angel. I love your poems. ((Krissy)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Krissy: Living in Basketball Country, i got absorbed in the NCAA tournament and didnt get to too many responses like i wanted to. ~Whop upside of my haid~ Wanted to give you an atta-girl on this, a big one, Krissy! Written like a true prophet-ess, with an eye for communicating in lines. *s* Your topics are interesting, sweet, and show care and time given to them. Never rush your poetry, keep a journal of your thoughts of poetic lines, and you will always have a cornacopia of ideas to entertain us! Your Bud, Jeff |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kris...you tell that Mum of yours I'm so very glad she "allowed" you into Passions...you've become quite an asset in the poetry department... |
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