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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
nothing really matters a choice, life, death a blind impulse made every hour, minute, every breath shorter then my past theirs life ahead of me and why delay what happening inevitability untouched they do not see this choice every day it torments me the chronic pain that is life and it intolerable daily strife the thoughts that run though my head makes my hart sink like inner lump of led so when you want to care don’t ask me why i hide at least i’m here for the rest of the ride Thank you for your time :shy: |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Matt, the ending is so great....glad to see that no matter what, you are sticking it out!! Good job  I am sorry for your pain though... |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Write, Matt, write! Keep plugging!  Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
this is good writing! you know, it could be a song, I can already hear the guitar behind these lyrics. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Matt, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to you and your tears! (sigh) Know you are loved by many, sweet friend, this pain will pass! Our thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Matt, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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