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Victoria
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0 posted 2002-03-19 11:24 PM



Beyond the mist

twilight time

are wings of a dew kiss morn

where shores of tomorrow

reflect tides of our love

footprints from yesterday

in search of our dreams

as sand stones scatter

memoirs in the seas

where whispers of love

creep over a bridge of moonlight

to the other side

where wishes come true

and walk hand in hand with you





"If music be the food of love, play on."  (William Shakespeare)




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1 posted 2002-03-19 11:56 PM


may your accumulation of the
sandpebbles be a fruitful one
and may your basket, never be worn
from the weight of the stone.

Love is for keeping.
Jeff

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2 posted 2002-03-20 03:20 AM


Would it not be nice if a bridge like that truly existed?  Can you tell I loved it?

The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives.
  ~* Albert Einstein *~

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3 posted 2002-03-20 08:17 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too wish a bridge like this existed, so every one of us can run happily in tears to the otherside and embrace our true love happily without having to yearn so long! (kiss on cheek) This is so very lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-03-20 08:23 AM


Victoria,
A warm and lovely read. Enjoyed

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5 posted 2002-03-20 09:47 AM


You know I love this, Vic. Aside from the topic, which is the story of my life, it's a beautifully written poem.
Sandra

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6 posted 2002-03-20 10:18 AM


Victoria I would know one of your poems anywhere, you do have your own style and I love it. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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7 posted 2002-03-20 10:43 AM


loved it
Victoria
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8 posted 2002-03-20 11:29 AM


thank you Jeff..lovely response as always hugs

sharon..thank you..would be nice Sharon...nice to
hear from you...thank you hugs

noah..thank you..yes you would be first in line hugs

sy..thank yoy so much..and for peeking in this morning.hugs

sandra..you always make me chuckle..hugss thank you dear one

thank you floria..so nice of you to say..hugss..
appreciate you nice comments

vandana..thank you so much..hugss glad you enjoyed hugs


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9 posted 2002-03-20 12:43 PM


Your writing never fails to stir the senses, my friend.  This is truly lovely. *hugs*  

Michael

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

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10 posted 2002-03-20 02:42 PM


Thank you Michael..nice to hear from you today..hugs..glad you enjoyed my words

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11 posted 2002-03-20 06:44 PM


where whispers of love
creep over a bridge of moonlight
to the other side
where wishes come true
and walk hand in hand with you"


~V~

I love the feeling of this...beautiful


HUGSSS

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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12 posted 2002-03-20 07:05 PM


I love those memories, V... they will never be lost in time

hugss
M

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13 posted 2002-03-21 04:19 PM


thank you Lauren..always nice to hear from you ..hugsss

maureen..thank you ..and for peeking in ..hugs


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