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Bella
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since 2002-02-15
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0 posted 2002-02-17 01:04 AM


and so I'm waking up now
from the tangled
and hazy mess
that has been me

I'm searching for spring
and a new sun
a new place to breathe in


and here are you
an attachment to my side
a permanent fixture

how I've grown with you
but regressed to a place
that is tired and worn-

(the one piece of me I won't let you know)

how do I go
when so much of you
has been here
weaved in me

how do I let go of hands
that always offer themselves

but most importantly
the thought that hangs over me
in these long, new nights...

how could I stop loving you?


© Copyright 2002 Jennie Winck - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2002-02-17 01:11 AM


What a wonderful piece to offer as your entree to Passions... It's nice to welcome you to our poetic home.  You'll love it here.  Settle in and enjoy.... and check your email for a special greeting...
EagleOne
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2 posted 2002-02-17 01:12 AM


Never an easy question, I enjoyed your ponder!

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-02-17 01:13 AM


Excellent...James
RosePetal
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4 posted 2002-02-17 01:22 AM


welcome to poetry land! I'm certain you will love it here and find inspiration in many of the poets Nice poem!

RP

Severn
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5 posted 2002-02-17 02:01 AM


Welcome Bella...

If this is a true-to-life piece, I know how this feels..I'm going through it right now...

hugs to you,

will be watching for more from you..

K

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6 posted 2002-02-17 02:05 AM


Bella, welcome to these blue pages. I really enjoyed your poem, and especially this:
"I'm searching for spring
and a new sun
a new place to breathe in"



doreen peri
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7 posted 2002-02-17 02:55 AM


it's easy.....


.... you don't.....


beautiful writing!

Sunshine
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8 posted 2002-02-17 07:19 AM



Welcome to a whole new World, Bella! I look forward to more of your poetry.

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.


Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
9 posted 2002-02-17 09:07 AM


    
Wonderful First Post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work here.
~Hugs, Nancy Lee~


~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me~


[This message has been edited by Enchantress (02-17-2002 01:56 PM).]

Charisma
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10 posted 2002-02-17 09:08 AM


Welcome to passions and I truly enjoyed your entrance..looking forward to read more

Charisma

Victoria
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11 posted 2002-02-17 09:45 AM


Welcome to Passions and i really enjoyed your words..looking forward to reading more poems from you..

               ~Victoria~

"Silence is a friend who
will never betray."
— Confucius


Mistletoe Angel
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12 posted 2002-02-17 12:18 PM




YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, this is a marvelous first post, may you forever find true loves happiness in your heart! I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Jennie, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jennie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-17-2002 12:18 PM).]

Bill Charles
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13 posted 2002-02-17 12:37 PM


Bella - haunting questions asked in this write. welcome to PIP, and hope to see more of your writings...

BC

Silver Streak
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14 posted 2002-02-17 01:11 PM


Bella, this is a wonderful write. Thanks for sharing.
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Startime
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15 posted 2002-02-17 01:39 PM


Welcome to Passions...this poem comes from your heart and touched me...Beautiful...I don't think we ever stop loving someone once we have given our love...we just sometimes are forced to move on....**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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