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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2002-03-17 08:04 PM

The wind to shear the clouds above me
Paint a single angels wing
In strokes so delicate upon a pallet airy
The wind the artist, brushes of poetic sing

And on in cotton batting rests the moist
Pondering the altitudes in pretty
In groupings huddled close the sun's rejoiced
The wind comedian lifts light and witty

In wispy hues of lilting blues choreographed hover
Slip horizons layered out upon the sea
Pleasantly to decorate soft icing on the other
The wind to orchestrate this graceful reverie

Copyright Kkh 3/17/02

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-03-17 08:08 PM

You have a very classic style in your writing, and one that I am enjoying a great deal...

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

2 posted 2002-03-17 08:46 PM

Very good. Enjoyed reading this one.

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

3 posted 2002-03-18 04:23 PM

This is nothing but downright beautiful...

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

4 posted 2002-03-18 06:20 PM

WONDERFULLY EXPRESSIVE POETIC LANGUAGE!!! Really enjoyed reading this. ***Ivy Rose

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2002-03-18 08:05 PM

I agree with everyone else, this is very beautiful.
Sandra

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-03-18 08:14 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo enchanting, sweet friend, I love the wind sooooooo much and the music it always whistles, this is absolutely breathtaking! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is spellbindingly wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2002-03-18 08:48 PM

Thanks everyone...
Appreciate all I am learning from all of you.
ThisDiamond

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

8 posted 2002-03-18 09:37 PM

T.Diamond:

beautifully crafted word stew!
Cook on, Poet!
jeff

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

9 posted 2002-03-19 06:51 AM

ThisDiamond, here you have painted a picture with words, you have taken your pen and your talent to bring us all high above the land to a place of imagination and retreat, you have given us an insight to your world of thought.

Great write

Sincerely Rick

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

10 posted 2002-03-19 08:25 AM

Applauding...shere brilliance this diamond is

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

11 posted 2002-03-19 08:32 AM

~Ah, just gorgeous, so pleased to have read. It sounds lovely too, read aloud, enjoyed, and admiring your craft. *Peace.

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