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Second_Guess
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0 posted 2002-02-16 11:50 PM



Sometimes

Sometimes even with
The one you love
Speaking to you quietly
You can still feel
So alone
Sometimes even with
The knowledge
That he loves you
Your heart still
Aches with loneliness
Sometimes all you want
Are soft touches
Followed by
Even softer whispers
Sometimes your soul
Needs the closeness
That nothing else
But the touch of
His warm hand
Stroking your hair
So tenderly
Like you were
A priceless gift.
Can give
Sometimes you just
Want to be looked at
With such awe
With such a sense
Of devotion
It makes you cry.
Sometimes you need
Simply what words
Cannot give.



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RosePetal
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1 posted 2002-02-17 01:32 AM


Hi

This is one of the best poems I've read tonight! It has so much truth to it.
Sometimes we all need reassurance
and to beshown that we are truly loved!

(hugs)
RP

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with you
2 posted 2002-02-17 01:33 AM


I couldn't agree more with you
very nicely said

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Gaia
3 posted 2002-02-17 02:35 AM


This one speaks so much truth. Sometimes we just need the soft kitty touch.
Bella
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4 posted 2002-02-17 03:05 AM


wow...how close these words are to me tonight.  I understand the loneliness in a love that seems to be all talk, no proof. Know that amidst the anguish you may feel, you are not alone.

above everything else, love one another...
life is as fleeting as the wind

amusemi
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5 posted 2002-02-17 11:00 AM


Very real, and very well said!!
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6 posted 2002-02-17 12:30 PM




YAY!!! BRAVO!!! I couldn't agree with you more, I think we all must nurture love and in order to do so, we must accept and really show trust and commitment to holding it true! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent writing! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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