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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-03-16 05:54 PM

Silence
Darkest light
Isolation

Wandering thoughts
yearning nights
pillows hugged

tears fall
into emptiness
of loneliness

as silence
returns
again

[This message has been edited by Magnus (03-16-2002 05:54 PM).]

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-03-16 05:55 PM

Barry this is truly sensitive and sweet, and it is 20 words. you did great. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-16 07:51 PM

(big huggsssssss) Oh Barry, this is so very sad, I know these feelings so very much for while I love my Joanna so much, I have yet to meet her, and I hope that her answer is yes and she will meet me and I no longer have to miss her as I approach summer! (sigh) This is a very sweet and sensitive poem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shien upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2002-03-16 07:54 PM

Which is why I'm getting very little sleep these days...great write, Barry!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-03-16 07:58 PM

Excellent one Barry!
Now aren't these fun...and addictive?

~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

5 posted 2002-03-17 12:00 PM

Magnus darling boy as always you write these with such skill and beauty I really found the only one of these I did just too hard to do, so I won’t be doing anymore. But you obviously have found an excellent format to write in. One that really shows your incredible skills to advantage.

Well done darling boy, very very well done

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

6 posted 2002-03-17 12:02 PM

Barry,

You do very well at these. It's amazing how much emotion and feeling can be expressed in so few words... you do it wonderfully

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2002-03-17 12:02 PM

Barry~

this is so tender....

peace to you...

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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