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SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

0 posted 2002-03-16 01:56 AM

Whispers~
why can't I
have you
still fall
from my lips
'when the thought of you
catches up
with me'

~SEA~

*the italicized is the title of a David Ball
song, it has huge meaning for me*

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

1 posted 2002-03-16 02:04 AM

Excellent, SEA!!!! Absolutely gorgeous poem.

***Ivy Rose

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

2 posted 2002-03-16 02:06 AM

Should one ever give up hope?
I say ... "live with the whispers"

excellent thoughts Sea

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2002-03-16 02:17 AM

This is lovely Sea...James

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-03-16 07:40 AM

Love the combining of whispers in this...beautiful!

GenXer
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since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

5 posted 2002-03-16 10:57 AM

Susan - Truly a fine poem. Very good.

Dave

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-03-16 11:22 AM

Sue, beautifully done!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

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7 posted 2002-03-16 11:25 AM

Very sweet!

((Susan))

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Duncan
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8 posted 2002-03-16 11:28 AM

I'd ask you to stop writing my heart but hey, it's saving me the intensity of doing it myself. Thanks, SEA.

SEA

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Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2002-03-16 12:02 PM

thank you all....
you should really listen to that song, if you don't know it....David Ball is a country singer, and it's the most amazing song ever.

Cowboy~

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-03-16 12:58 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love certain kinds of country music too, I'm not sure if I heard this or not, but I bet it is a gorgeous song! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooo lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

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By the sea

11 posted 2002-03-16 10:24 PM

lovely!

(((hugs)))

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

12 posted 2002-03-17 12:08 PM

Beautiful SEA!

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Magnus

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South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2002-03-17 12:14 PM

Sue...(whispering.... Wow...superb...)

Dark Angel
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14 posted 2002-03-17 01:26 AM

Beautiful!

Maree

Saunni
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West Virginia

15 posted 2002-03-17 02:52 AM

Excellent, Sea, just excellent!

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

16 posted 2002-03-17 10:31 AM

*sigh*. Lovely thoughts on unrequited love Sue.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Nightshade

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Posts 13962
just out of reach

17 posted 2002-03-17 11:52 AM

Lovely SEA. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Moonlight Romeo

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since 2001-09-10

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The heart of you

18 posted 2002-03-18 12:15 PM

Because, at times, the mind will not allow the heart to speak.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Soleil Noir
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USA

19 posted 2002-03-18 01:57 PM

A lovely thought, being reduced to whispers...

D.Lester Young
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Austin, Tx

20 posted 2002-03-18 02:27 PM

A creative piece in the whisper of words of meaning.

Aimster
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Charlotte, NC

21 posted 2002-03-18 07:53 PM

susan,

what a beautiful song my sweet
friend! you have such a loving heart.
and yes david ball is an amazing country
singer and i like that song you mention
as well. take care!!

amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

22 posted 2002-03-18 07:56 PM

This sure does express the feeling well.
Sandra

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