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Wind Songs |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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Wind Songs just off the Island near ‘ol clairvoyant ocean sits a lonely young son with wind songs in motion playing tunes all alone in silence he plays just for his mom with breezes on pines and ferns dancing on wills plays rhythm in blooze on old Pleasant Hill a North wind rips an autumn sting fingers plunking though breif sojourning southward flies the breath of spring song leaves turn to even’s pleading & with o’er hanging head and branches leaning silken elbows on knees reflecting feel his spirit in genuflecting fall’s ever rushing in her greeting forward & ever onward hills tinted wait her meeting red horizon lies in ponder sun is setting over yonder Dale Wayne Gwaltney Writen after a visit to the Island and mom’s grave in 1997/09/1101:11 PM |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Dale, this is soooooo beautiful, it is so sweet and loving for him to sing such a lovely song to his mother like this, this sings like music to the heart! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dale, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky,My Friend~ So very, very lovely ... 'alone in silence he plays just for his mom' And .... I know she hears the wind songs of her son~ So good to see you and Rosemary back 'home' in the circle of Passions' friends~ *Hugs*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I loved the imagery you captured in this poem and the wonderful format of the poem just added to the magical feel of the poem. thanks for sharing. Andrew "The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down" |
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