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Hula Fires |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Island drums beat within the soul of the sun sunset dances upon the stage of the seas sapphire waves sway within hula fires enticing a soft ukelele breeze a flowing skirt of amber rays beneath sleepy skies of mountain blue chanting winds serenade palms of dusk as spirits of the sunset bids adieu porcelain sands glow in the moonlight young lovers bathe in the night to soft whispers of mating whales beneath leis of misty twilight softly echoing native love songs moonlight gently removes her sarong "Mistakes are the portals of discovery." -- James Joyce [This message has been edited by Victoria (03-12-2002 08:37 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooo enchanting, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! This is by far one of my favorites of yours, sweet friend, this made me feel like I was in paradise and strumming my ukulele with my love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sapphire waves sway within hula fires enticing a soft ukelele breeze a flowing skirt of amber rays beneath sleepy skies of mountain blue chanting winds serenade palms of dusk as spirits of the sunset bids adieu porcelain sands glow in the moonlight young lovers bathe in the night =============================== Wonderful imagery here Victoria... your titles are as alluring as your poetry. beautiful poem...now we need a travel agent. You never knew what I loved in you, |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Noah..thank you..im so happy you enjoyed sweet one..hugs Janet Marie..thank you so much..always nice hearing from you..hugss |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh I want to be there too victoria, sounds so nice. Lovely write, I actually felt I was there.floria Floria |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Victoria,you have painted a beautiful picture here. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OK Lady Vic...made me feel like I was back on the island again....We used to go to eat at a place that had a trio that played hawaiian songs while a dancer danced... Enjoyed it...but alas...the sarong stayed on....darn, darn, darn! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
floria..thank you yes i miss the islands..beautiful there hugss juanita thank you ..so nice to hear from you hugss as always barry..i use to hula with a band in Hawaii..for the retirements centers..loved dancing the hula...a captive audience i guess you could say haa.. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Victoria I have been to Hawaii and your words took me back there as I smelt the frangipani flowers and felt the sun on my back. This was so beautifully written and so much enjoyed. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
sue..now that is one flower i dont remember..glad you enjoyed hon..hugss |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I like this. Very good. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you smart chick...and for peeking in |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Victoria - You surely can paint with your words. Very good. Dave |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~V~ I love that last line, one day I will make it there, and see the beauty in which you speak....HUGSSSS Lauren~ Greeneyes~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-11-2002 11:46 PM).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you dave..glad you enjoyed..nice to hear from you.. thank you lauren..i hope you do too..first time we went we took a cruise of the islands but that was before we moved there..hugss |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah, back to Hawaii, I want to go..Nice images, as always I can be surrounded by them in your writing. Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you..i began to write poetry in hawaii sandra..very inspiring hugss |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
O, Victoria, take me along! Please! I'll carry your bags, shine your shoes, fetch your brandy. Whatever. Just to see the Hula fires and all of those pretty dancing ladies. ((Victoria)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
newell thank you..yes you must go once at least...glad you enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I love to watch hula girls...and tahitian style dancers also...with the coconuts appropriately placed...James |
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