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RMW
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0 posted 2002-03-10 10:52 AM


(a re-post for an acquaintance deep in dust)

Of Verse and Music

They say that poets sing.
But crafting rhyme,
with ink and pen,
I worry
lest my hammering
disturb next door
the violins.

RMW

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2002-03-10 10:55 AM


*s   I like.. I have remodeled for 21 years....finally finished and it disturbed more than just the violins next door

M

Martie
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2 posted 2002-03-10 10:55 AM


Bob

Good morning

I can hear your hammering from here..it's true, the poet's voice and the thoughts that tear and build up, make such sweet sound.

Duncan
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3 posted 2002-03-10 10:59 AM


Damn, I like this!
Severn
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4 posted 2002-03-11 04:56 PM


~gasp~

I LOVE this...and it's rare to find a poem of only a few lines that strikes such a chord (no pun intended) - thanks, sincerely...

K

RMW
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5 posted 2002-03-11 05:05 PM


Thank you, all. Bob
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6 posted 2002-03-11 06:48 PM


Yeah, and I'd appreciate if you'd try hammering in the daytime more often so I could enjoy it more

Sunshine
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7 posted 2002-03-11 07:39 PM



Poets sing, indeed...you keep talking, here's the hammer....

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8 posted 2002-03-11 07:54 PM




(big hugggssssss) Awwwwww, I couldn't agree with you more, sweet friend, I believe  apoets thoughts, or lyrics, is the personality of each song a poet sings and always hammers such inspiration to others! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Richard, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Severn
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9 posted 2002-06-01 10:22 PM


This needed revisiting...

K

RMW
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10 posted 2002-06-03 10:33 AM


Catching up with my "thank you notes" ....

Interloper...laughing. Semper Fi.

Sunshine....Do you have something in a claw hammer. I've got a few nails that need pulling.

Noah ... as always, you are too kind.

Severn ... Young lady, coming from you, high praise indeed. Thank you.

Bob


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