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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Lost Hidden, you remained Beneath layers of her heart Unfolding with time Found Once only her dream Having given her reasons You became her real Mine She gives you her heart While committed to my arms I wish I were you Yours Hidden, you remained Having given her reasons To wish I were you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Soleil Noir, Something to think about, enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Oh my gosh, this is such a wonderful thought-provoking poem, sweet friend, I think that sometimes love can be deceiving in these ways where we want to be that person but it is never that easy! (sigh) This is wonderfully crafted, sweet friend, we all love you so much, I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Fighting for space against the ghost of another? Much to think about here. A good dark write. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
well this hits me in the heart........ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well thought out/written my friend. jwesley |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Those ghosts can be so haunting...very well said. |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Solier Noir will illume the dark for me opening the way This is really well written, how do you think my senryu thingies are coming along? Very well done, much truth in this smiles to your heart  Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh my this was a tad dark, but oh so well written and certainly made me think about your name as well The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Yes, very dark and thoughtful. And the form works well with this for me. Very good. |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Thank you all very much for reading. A tad dark? Well then, therein lies the other side of the sun... Yes, Krissy, I think your Senryus are coming along just fine! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
interesting thought to tie it up in the end.. well done |
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