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Waikiki Beach |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Waikiki Beach Sunbeams and rain drops dare to share this lovely tropical paradise with palm trees swaying gracefully through the playful skies. Masses of sexy suntanned bodies soaked with gooey lotion laying on tranquil beaches and floating on silky oceans. Lovers sharing the magical embrace of this tropical delight. Romantic moments filled with gentle kisses adorning soft moonlit nights. Waikiki has become a place that I truly adore along the white sandy beaches upon the Hawaiian shores. JamesLee March07 2002 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There was a bit of alliteration in this one that makes it a delight to read aloud...well done, James... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i use to love driving through Waikiki at night too james..down through Kahala..my favorite beach was Kailua Beach..the sands were so soft and it wasnt crowded with the tourists..i do miss Hawaii...of course there is more women in Waikiki ha..i can see why you like it best..  I enjoyed your words James~Vic |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I have been to Oahu once and it is so majestic there, I dream of sharing a honeymoon in the future with my dream girl and sharing such romantic evenings on the creamy balmy beaches with her, and I would love to see Waikiki! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
James, I found Waikiki a little to commercial, but there are some lovely places, Enjoyed |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
sounds like you found a slice of paradise... nicely done |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* it sounds like a dream....stunning...someday I am going to have to see this beach for myself...maybe it will inspire me to write of it but even if it did I could not put the beauty in it that you have....I love the vision you have woven in this poem, James...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
I've never been there, but you paint a very lovely picture of it. Nicely done. *S* |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Been there...and you depict it perfectly.. Nice James... |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
too cool. my favorite when i lived there was hanauma bay for just swimming/snorkeling/scuba diving, and pretty much the whole of northshore for non-commerical peace (and shell hunting, but don't tell anyone) nice rendition here - and i remember the rain... it was nothing like the cold stuff we're getting here. lolChristopher |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
James this is wonderful.I felt I was laying on that hot white sand looking out at the blue waters. Lovely write, floria Floria |
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