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walker
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0 posted 2002-03-06 09:18 PM



Tu amor
trago del mas rico licor
Es miel en mis labios
suave, dulce
pero aveces amargo
Cuantas veces
me quieres
y me hieres
Esta loca pasion
me lleva a la desesperacion
Pues como yo te amo
nadie te a amado
Te quiero mi amor

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Alwye
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1 posted 2002-03-06 09:21 PM


I'm a 5th year spanish student, so I understood a lot of this...and I liked it a lot.  Wonderful poetry, it's cool to see something in another language (especially when I can figure it out, LOL).  

*Krista Knutson*

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2 posted 2002-03-06 09:26 PM


LOL! Ain't it the truth...sweet and bitter combined...that's the way it is. Very nicely said, walker...honey on the lips....a nice vision
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3 posted 2002-03-06 09:44 PM




YAY!! Ah mi cielos, amo este tanto, amigo dulce, no es divertido escribir en otros idiomas? (sonrisas) Yo he comenzado a escribir muchas canciones en el latín porque cuando yo me los canto a yo mismo, ellos suenan tan romántico y acabo de querer para recoger una guitarra y serenade mi chica de sueño Joanna! (el beso en la mejilla) Todos nosotros amor usted tanto, amigo dulce, esto es excelente! Usted tiene tal un corazón hermoso, el dulce Walke, gracias para compartir!



Puede amar y poder encender siempre puede brillar sobre usted!

Amor,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-03-06 09:50 PM


Walker...OK...you got me with this one...
Where is my translator...Let me call my
son in law...He will understand...Surely
this is a poem to a lover...and you are
telling him of your love...right????

I hope so...cause that is how it is to me!

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5 posted 2002-03-06 10:11 PM


Darn, my college spanish is not quite enough for this one. Looks beautiful though, from what I could understand.
Sandra

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