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ecrivan
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0 posted 2002-03-05 11:09 PM



take it from the top of my head
or will it from the tip of tongue
what part of anatomy I may use
to get the meaning across to you


take it from the bottom of my heart
joint manoeuvres rest until they part
enact rites from the pit of their souls?
reach down deep where there are no holes?


be these enactments at our finertips
or be they all within arms reach,
who really tests the waters of co-operation
dive deeper and often end up with litigation.


working together proves commendable for all involved
co-habitation suits low income earners until impatience calls
open-relationships do well as long as liberty remains
liberty, a matter of opinion where freedom is not strained.



© Copyright 2002 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-05 11:19 PM




(big hugggssssss) Wow, this is sooooooo powerfully thought-provoking, sweet friend, it definitely takes a lot of strength and wisdom to allow both logic and emotion to co-exist sometimes when it comes to creating liberty! (sigh) It seems there is much reason involved, but I just wish we could use our hearts more and find solutions between everyone to make justice and hope possible for everyone! (sigh) Ooohhhh...there I go rambling aagin, this is a wonderful poem of thinking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ecrivan
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2 posted 2002-03-05 11:24 PM


a balance of logic and emotion, correct my friend but some deny emotion fro their companions only to have it slap them in the face later on..heh


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