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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-03-06 09:31 PM

Two hearts and souls upon the night
In love of eyes in starlit sight
from light of moon till dawn of day
joined hearts in swoon and love and sway

A step in time and tune and rhyme
as two become one love in time
and joy is then the way of choice
as one becomes another’s voice.

At break of day and dawn of sun
when one as two become as one
a kiss is shared as moist lips touch
in view of all, in love of much

Mirrored reflect caught in one dream
of flowing love down a clear stream
A swirl of leaves enter soft flight
as lovers passion fills the night

A gasp and sigh do touch the ear
as drops of love from eyes flow clear
two hands entwined tell of delight
as love once made becomes so right

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2002-03-06 09:35 PM

A step in time and tune and rhyme
as two become one love in time
and joy is then the way of choice
as one becomes another’s voice.

What a truly romantic write!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

2 posted 2002-03-06 09:38 PM

Magnus this is simply beautiful. Love these lines"two hands entwined tell of delight
as love once made becomes so right" and all the rest. Very romantic loving poem. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-03-06 09:40 PM

Mirrored reflect caught in one dream
of flowing love down a clear stream
A swirl of leaves enter soft flight
as lovers passion fills the night

A gasp and sigh do touch the ear
as drops of love from eyes flow clear
two hands entwined tell of delight
as love once made becomes so right
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Barry, oh Barry! Now I am sure you must have heard one big giant old sigh coming from up north tonight right? Certainly...I know the neighbours heard it.
And they know Nancy is in the Passions site again reading Magnus.

Well done!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
is someone to wish for you.~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2002-03-06 09:42 PM

A love lived... I like ThisDiamond

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-03-06 09:51 PM

Chris, thank you very much...very pleased
that you enjoyed...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-03-06 09:52 PM

Floria...thank you...I wanted the cadence
to be a little better, but overall I was
pleased...and I am more so with your gracious
reply...

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-03-06 09:53 PM

"Mirrored reflect caught in one dream
of flowing love down a clear stream
A swirl of leaves enter soft flight
as lovers passion fills the night

A gasp and sigh do touch the ear
as drops of love from eyes flow clear
two hands entwined tell of delight
as love once made becomes so right"

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Barry, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words never cease to capture the beauty of romance at its finest, this is soooooooo beautifully romantic! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may your love forever swoon over these words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-03-06 09:53 PM

Gosh Nancy, I thought it was an earthquake
coming through the area....Whewww!! Had
me worried...Happy you liked...THANX much..

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2002-03-06 09:55 PM

This Diamond....thank you...enjoy your words.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2002-03-06 09:56 PM

Noah, friend of mine...you are that...and
I do always appreciate your words...thanx

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

11 posted 2002-03-06 09:59 PM

Magnus darling boy this is simply outstanding writing, you have done so well here I don’t know how you do it. Again flawless and perfectly presented. What can I say but this is exceptional. YOU always write brilliantly and today is no exception. YOU have such a fabulous talent and in this your portray it to pure perfection

Wonderful flow and rhythm the rhyme is fabulous too

You can tell I love it can’t you? MMmmm I thought it would show

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2002-03-06 10:02 PM

Mushy dearest, how could I ever not like
your warm and wonderful words....they are
an inspiration as much as all of the others
that are so kind ... you are this my poetic
friend...

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

13 posted 2002-03-06 10:44 PM

Two hearts and souls upon the night

A step in time and tune and rhyme

At break of day and dawn of sun

Mirrored reflect caught in one

A gasp and sigh do touch the ear

as love once made comes right, here

Took a little of yours, tweaked, voila...

see what you did?

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

14 posted 2002-03-06 10:50 PM

Magnus~
Southerly *sighing* is also in vogue~

'joy is then the way of choice
as one becomes another’s voice.'

Very, very nicely penned~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

15 posted 2002-03-06 11:19 PM

Magnus...This is very beautiful and very touching. I think one of your very best. MAGNIFICENT PIECE!!!!! ***Ivy Rose

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

16 posted 2002-03-06 11:36 PM

*sigh* oh yes...a masterpiece of romance and love.......oh my gosh, Barry...you just keep getting better and making me sigh even before I start to read...This poem is ABSOLUTELY STUNNING....the romance in it made me all dreamy eyed...I love it...I love it...**big hugs**

to be one of two hearts in swoon would be the most amazing thing to happen to any lady....

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

17 posted 2002-03-06 11:39 PM

Magnus - Great romantic write. The rhythm and imagery of this poem was right on cue. Well done.

Dave

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

18 posted 2002-03-07 12:01 PM

Another romantic one from you! Very nice!

Cor

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