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So you shall knock and it will be opened
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So you shall knock and it will be opened |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298
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I gave up on trying to format this into a post box...so please forgive having to click on the link to see it ...jb So you shall knock and it will be opened |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I can see the format adds a great deal to the poem... nice work! Enjoyed |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
thanks cpat...I rarely use form, but this one just sorta wrote itself like that...funny how poems do that sometimes... |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This is really good... walls so well I know them build them and tear them down all the time LOL mostly walls seem to get in my way...but it sure feels safe , doesn't it? |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How appropriate that to read a poem with such a title one must click (knock) and wait for the site (door) to open. *S* Don't give me that innocent act... you planned it that way!!! LOL The poem is excellent... enhanced by a powerful presentation. I don't know the answers... but I like the asking! |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh I am so glad you didnt change the format, it added so much to an already powerful poem. I do love your words. Very strong and emotional and oh those walls. Yes those walls we build. Love this. floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) OH MY GOSH, THIS IS WONDERFUL, THE FORM IS EXCELLENT!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) This is excellent, sweet friend, I just love how you portray your emotions, this is fabulous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JellyBeansGal~ Powerful presentation ... WOW ! I'm with SuthernGal ... and say ... THANKS for 'planning' it~ Perfect ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
They got you! I thought it was neat as once you got inside I saw a staircase going up. Great ideas here, well done. ~* Without deep reflection one knows from daily life that one exists for other people ." *~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very awesome work, lady. The presentation adds greatly....good to see you. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
jellybeans Wonderful poetry...strong and honest writing. I too loved the presentation. So good to see you, it's been awhile. |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Stereo poetry....I like it. Nice write JB! Mike |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
beautifully done....... visually creative and musically awesome.... bittersweet painfully purely emotionally excellent..... as always..... i love your work.... miss you |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Very nice write.This held a deep meaning for me and touched my soul.You have made me see somethings I'v known were there but not knowing how to discard them.I'm going to keep this one.  Peaches |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wow..that was just wonderful, the words and meaning behind it...*s M |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i agree with nakedthoughts...nicely done.. i must try one of these formats and see what i come up with ha.. ~Victoria "Mistakes are the portals of discovery." |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
Zinsser, thank you and yep, wall have that safe feeling don’t they? suthern…lol, now….that is a really great idea…the knocking to open the poem thingy…and if I were the conniving type I would take credit for it……..lolol…but nope…it was out of frustration with my html skills that I did it like that….thank you lady strbbux, thank you so much…and yes I agree, I rarely write with form, but this one just came out like that, it is not the same poem without the form noah, thank you so much, you are a sweet and compassionate soul marge….lol, you guys keep that up and you will have me thinking I did plan it that way |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
mysteria, thank you bal…good to see you too….thank you Mr. Balladeer sir Martie, thank you…I hadn’t realized that I had missed being here, until I came back, so many good people to see mike…stereo poetry? never heard of that…..but thank you Doreen…thank you so much…and yep, miss you too… |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
peaches thank you, I too have been searching for some answers inside also, if I helped you in your search, then I am glad nakdthoughts…thank you lady Victoria…thank you…would love to see what you come up with ok, this is bizarre, I know I have seen posts longer than these, but it made me break it up into no more than 5 thank yous per post *shakes her head* oh well...just to let you know...I am not wracking up the number of posts on my poem........rofg |
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