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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-03-05 07:21 AM



You Moved Me…..a love poem of my own

I must have been
a mountain
for you moved me
and before you
I wonder how
I could ever be
destiny is fantasy
flooding reality
beyond all control
what is this miracle
I know of
two sharing one soul
love is
much more than
a time and a place
it is written
in stone where nothing
can damage or erase
I have been
touched in my heart
by your hand
and know things now
before I could
never understand
for I
was a mountain
and you moved me


"Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread."

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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since 2001-03-19
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1 posted 2002-03-05 08:14 AM


godly images
of the touch
of love

enjoyed this one lady

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-03-05 08:16 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, isn't it amazing what love can move and create? (smiles) May love forever pull you away to paradise, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
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Calif.
3 posted 2002-03-05 12:53 PM


exquisite.....
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2002-03-05 01:15 PM


... and now Muhammed must come to the mountain

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
5 posted 2002-03-05 01:33 PM



I know of
two sharing one soul
love is
much more than
a time and a place
it is written
in stone where nothing
can damage or erase
I have been
touched in my heart
by your hand
and know things now
before I could
never understand
for I
was a mountain
and you moved me

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Beautiful and heartfelt.....

Thank you
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