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EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2002-03-03 03:35 PM



Inspiration is a river
                 that never
                        goes away.

You can swim downstream or fight against it,
           it is there to stay.

This stream of ever eminence
                      continuance + will
Shall carry you through the toughest times,
                 if you will
                            it still.
                                  

God alone is alone. Man is not.

© Copyright 2002 Joseph Alexander Knob - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2002-03-03 03:54 PM


So wise and so well written. Good work...
"In the struggle between the rock and the stream, it is the stream that wins, not through might but through persistence..."
ThisDiamond

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2 posted 2002-03-03 03:54 PM


So wise and so well written. Good work...
"In the struggle between the rock and the stream, it is the stream that wins, not through might but through persistence..."
ThisDiamond

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3 posted 2002-03-03 04:20 PM


I have to say, I like this one very much.  Seems the inspiration is always there if we take the time to look for it.  Nicely done!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Martie
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4 posted 2002-03-03 04:30 PM


Eagle

Love the way you wrote these wise words.

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5 posted 2002-03-03 09:00 PM




BRAVO!!! Ooohhhhhhh...I love it, sweet friend, the possibilities are endless, may we all search for inspiration and hold onto every dream we have and cherish its afterglow forever! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, the beauty of your words is endless! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joseph, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-03-04 10:57 AM


Inspiration is a river
that never
goes away"

So true the words spoken here....this was a delight to read....


Greeneyes~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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7 posted 2002-03-04 12:26 PM


Excellent form and profound words; great write altogether!

Love your work.

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