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janmew
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since 2001-10-27
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0 posted 2002-03-03 01:08 PM


(this one's format was just a fun style experiment)

You unlocked the door
to a place I'd never been before;
I took your hand
and we walked freely through it

You helped me view
a world I'd never seen before,
Wrapped in your arms,
you gently took me to it.

I could not see
the forest for the trees before.
I sang the songs
but never heard the music.

My sky was grey,
the sun could not be seen before.
You parted the cloud
and let the light shine through it.

I never knew
what love I had in me before,
but now I know,
there's no way to refute it!

© Copyright 2002 Jan - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-03 01:14 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too am always amazed and can't help but smile feeling how just falling in love can change so much and bring magic to everything possible! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may love forever bring music and magic to your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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