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Professor Gloom
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0 posted 2002-03-02 04:05 AM


Proverbs : [34] For jealousy is the rage of a man: therefore he will not spare in the day of vengeance. [35] He will not regard any ransom; neither will he rest content, though thou givest many gifts.


How can I take from your hand
Any gift,
Can I make you understand
Given and then retaken,
All your gifts
The meanings are now reshaping
To things I sure you don’t mean
In giving,
So I must be cruel and mean
To be sure there’s no second
Returning,
No matter your new intent
Of giving,
I can’t make you understand.

Gloom



© Copyright 2002 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2002-03-02 04:08 AM


Gloom,
I'm sure there would be a second and third returning when you give gifts like this.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Professor Gloom
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2 posted 2002-03-02 05:49 AM


Thank you, Kethry
For your praise, but I believe you don’t understand the poem,
I was not giving a gift, but refusing a gift.
Some times things given, no matter how well meaning
Can not be accepted.

Gloom

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3 posted 2002-03-02 02:15 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Aszard, this is so very true, sweet friend, even when there is charity in ones heart, we must always be conscientious and accept only the gifts that really are meaningful! (sigh) This is sooooo wonderfully said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Nan
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4 posted 2002-03-02 06:02 PM


Giving and Taking - the crux of all... Nicely said, PG..
Keith Morgan
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5 posted 2002-03-02 06:47 PM


Being true to yourself, is the key to your happiness and others around you.  Truthfully written piece.

Write from the soul and the words will flow

Zinsser
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6 posted 2002-03-02 09:13 PM


Sad for both.....but you must do what your heart says... even when it's hurting
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