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strbbux
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0 posted 2002-03-01 01:21 PM



Perhaps Peter picked petunias,
poured panned pancakes ,
penned poetry, played poker,
primed proper, partied particularly,
passed potential, performed perfectly,
predicted pandemonium, petted pigs,
powdered prettily, pinched Patty.
PERFECTLY


Ploria

[This message has been edited by strbbux (03-01-2002 01:56 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-01 01:35 PM




(giggles in delight) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooo cute and delightful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) This is an excellent reply to the challenge, sweet friend, we all love you so much! YAY!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Floria, thank you for sharing!



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Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-03-01 01:41 PM


Properly posed

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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3 posted 2002-03-01 01:50 PM


poetry penned perfectly pretty ploria ha..

                     ~Pictoria

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4 posted 2002-03-01 01:55 PM


Noah thank you so much, you always make my day brighter, floria

Interloper, well done reply. floria

Victoria, ok, now I will go around calling your pictoria and I will be ploria, LOL.

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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5 posted 2002-03-01 02:14 PM


Petted pigs? LOL!   Loved it!

Michael Auguste~
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6 posted 2002-03-01 02:55 PM


perfectionistically profound!!!  

patently penned!!!  

realy good. . . LOL

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7 posted 2002-03-01 03:50 PM


"Ploria" lol.....well done..lol...Chris

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8 posted 2002-03-01 03:52 PM


Pretty P-one

Charisma

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9 posted 2002-03-01 05:34 PM


Painstakingly penned poetry, Ploria...
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10 posted 2002-03-01 05:34 PM


Wow, you did a wonderful job here.
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11 posted 2002-03-01 06:21 PM


Thanks auguste, glad I gave you a chuckle. floria

Sven, this was fun, thanks for the challenge. floria

Nightshade, thanks much for stopping by. floria

Charisma, thank you much for your reply. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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12 posted 2002-03-01 06:22 PM


Amigo hahah, thanks floria

Smartchick, thanks much for your reply, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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13 posted 2002-03-01 06:26 PM


Floria hi there this must have been really hard. I really did like this and admire the way you’ve done this


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy


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at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

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14 posted 2002-03-01 06:29 PM


Hi Krissy, actually no it wasn't hard at all it was fun. Try it. You will love doing it. Thanks,floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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15 posted 2002-03-01 07:33 PM


Floria~


Perfectly penned poet.....wonderful!!!


Lauren~

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Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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16 posted 2002-03-01 09:07 PM


Perfectly penned Ploria!
~Pugs, Pancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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17 posted 2002-03-01 09:40 PM


looks like you had fun with this one

a pleasure to read

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18 posted 2002-03-01 10:55 PM


predicted pandemonium, petted pigs,
powdered prettily, pinched Patty.
PERFECTLY

Adorable, Floria...I especially loved the pigs.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

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19 posted 2002-03-02 12:41 PM


prettily penned ploria.
Kethry

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20 posted 2002-03-02 09:14 PM


Thanks for the smiles,Ploria. I needed them.
Pandora

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21 posted 2002-03-02 10:03 PM


Probably potted petunias

Loved this!

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22 posted 2002-03-03 12:15 PM


Floria - Pleasantly pleasing poem. I myself am unparticular about what parties I attend.lol

Pave

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23 posted 2002-03-03 10:04 AM


Thank you every one of you my friends, sorry I haven't answere individuall, I have the nasty flu and can't seem to catch up on the blue pages. LOL...thanks to all. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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