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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-02-28 07:57 PM


Nay maid, doth thee not know mine bed's not thine.
Wilt thee not become aware wherein love shines
Thy art most beautiful, thy art truly most desired
Lust for thee swells as passion’s coals are fired.

Tho heart is taken, thee doth hold thy lover’s key.
Tho my love yet be forsaken, wilt thee come to me
A nights’ pleasure forthwith I barter thee my soul
A moment twixt minds to treasure whilst bells toll.

Thy hand taken, giveth to one thee doth not desire
Thy love shaken within womb chills from coldest fire.
Red flames of lust thee have within mine own arms
Wilt mine lips quench thy thirst, taste of thy charms

Upon a steady steed I wait beyond the great stone wall
as mine ears strain to hear thy lips cry a softest call.
Wilt thy words call mine name in thy whisper nigh.
Can thee not know love awaits thee in soulful sigh

[This message has been edited by Magnus (02-28-2002 08:06 PM).]

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amusemi
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1 posted 2002-02-28 08:03 PM


With words like that you'd tempt any woman!!


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Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-02-28 08:07 PM


BIG SIGHS CAN BE HEARD COMING FROM UP IN CANADA TONIGHT

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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3 posted 2002-02-28 08:09 PM


A very nice theesis of romance, good sir
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4 posted 2002-02-28 08:51 PM



In tender torment love should find you nay distraught
Thy rendering word seeks but one love that be caught...
Good, sweet Sir, kind lord, should one but be free
Then in all wonder, I would thee speak to me...

Ah Magnus...I know I don't do it quite right, but you do make me want to!  Write, I mean!  Like you do!  Well done, I enjoyed!

Magnus
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5 posted 2002-02-28 09:10 PM


For all thine eyes I write with words of olde
from within mine soul in quill strokes bold

Doth maid of light of sun ask of me....

Doth thee know sire..
my quest to write like thee..
in words of olde with Knights of chivalry...

so shall it be!!!!

Go ahead ...  try it...

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