»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #19
»
before now...before you
| Open Poetry #19 |
|
before now...before you |
|
|
Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I have never loved someone from the inside…out before now before you contentment coupled with passion approaches infinity believe me the reality of you will still stop my heart many lifetimes from now |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Duncan - All Rights Reserved | |||
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Duncan, this may be one of the most intense love poems I have read. Much happiness is in store for you. Sandra |
||
|
Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* filled with the love and passion within your heart...very well done, Duncan...she will melt from your words and the love you have for her...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan, Well done, good write. |
||
|
Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Duncan: "believe me the reality of you will still stop my heart many lifetimes from now" I love it - you have very strong words. Love is wonderful when the right one comes along. Much happiness to you! |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
believe me the reality of you will still stop my heart many lifetimes from now ============================== "approaches infinity" ???? my dear poet Duncan ... with that verse ... you just touched infinity. and took most all our breath away in the doing so. "Never made it as a wise man |
||
|
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Duncan darling boy What can I say except this is utterly wonderful. This is heart-stoppingly lovely, so breathtaking that I’m left gasping in admiration. Truly outstandingly fabulous writing here.    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
||
|
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
This is really romantic, full of love, and you know that's the type of poem that I love. Great work here  |
||
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
||
|
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
My friend...this indeed should win the heart and sighs of all who have a romantic bone in their body.. great composition!! |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...james |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
believe me the reality of you will still stop my heart many lifetimes from now ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh Duncan! That lucky lucky woman!! These are mighty powerful words!! Enough to make any woman melt. Great writing! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
||
|
Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Sometimes your poetry just leaves me speechless….this is one of those times. Karen’s right, I’m melting…you know how much I love this don’t you? And I will remind you of this, many lifetimes from now…when you’re bored with me!!! Lol. I’m heading out on my travels shortly, but I shall take this with me…til Monday darlin  If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? [This message has been edited by Tracey (02-28-2002 04:39 PM).] |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love it..and the truth contained within..that is the way love should be ..from the inside out *s M |
||
|
rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Duncan, Everyone else already pointed out the last stanza.. but I have to say I agree with their opinions. Just beautiful! I'm sooooooooo glad you are this happy Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
||
|
amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
This is soo cool. It's easy to know the outside person, but the inside one is so much harder to know....great write!!! |
||
|
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
No wonder I never hadda chance  Smooth writing, mister  |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now this sounds like a poem that has been written by a heart in love with its soulmate... Love the last lines... |
||
|
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent expression of love Duncan...Nicely written.. |
||
|
Hopefloats Junior Member
since 2001-10-30
Posts 26NH |
I agree with Cat...absolutely intense..loved it..so well done!!! |
||
|
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful and deep expression here, my friend jwesley |
||
|
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Your heart sings in this...amazing grace, once lost, now found!  (I waited in line to tell you that, do I get xtra credit?) very touching, m'friend. |
||
|
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely, Duncan! Cor |
||
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your romantic heart shines with pure, tender love! (sigh) She is a very lucky woman, sweet friend, may you two forever share true happiness together! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
||
|
SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Cowboy could you BE a little more romantic?! *sigh* this is wonderful she is very lucky |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
