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Open Poetry #19

Morning Eyes of Old

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-02-28 07:59 AM

Morning Eyes of Old

Something in your eyes
trails your thoughts
in morning words.
From darkness
weaving silent gold
contageous feelings heard.
You are, you aren't
you have, you leave
perfection, guided hands.
I secret you, in heart anew
night songs, to morning land.

Far away, yet closer still
the feel of fantasy
erupts to reign
upon my light.
Become me, destiny.
Something in your eyes
to follow midnight
dreams of dawn.
I walk through darkness
into light
'til solitudes withdrawn.

Upon the air
I breathe the need,
digest the kiss of day.
To breakfast words
of rainbow taste
dissolving myst away.
Another lifetime
searching still
embodies me come morn.
I walk through darkness
into light,
your song of words
adorn.

Always, your morning words
treat the readers
to a wonderful "wake".
thanks DS

M

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (02-28-2002 08:03 AM).]

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2002-02-28 02:27 PM

Whoever DS is, is a lucky person to have such a beautiful piece written to her/him

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2002-02-28 02:28 PM

very nicely done... quite the write here...

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2002-02-28 02:37 PM

Maureen
This is wonderful writing. I know what you mean.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2002-02-28 03:35 PM

"I", DS is Dark Stranger, an old friend from another site once..but here for now...his words always make the early morning risers ooooooh and ahhhhhhhhhhh *s

"C" thanks a bunch *s

I knew you would understand Martie *s

thank you all
Maureen

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

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