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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-02-27 10:35 PM


(This is dedicated to Lady Luna, on this lovely moonlit night)

Lunar Kisses
By: Noah Eaton
12/8/00

Soft, silky Lady Luna
Sheds her lucid cotton upon the blanket of the world
She presents a joyful smile,
one of crescent,
that showers the mountains
With lunar kisses, seething in the autumn breeze
A breath of gleaming love that fills the entire night with romance
Glittering floodlights lacrimate from moons eyes, which light upon a river below
Sighs of the spirit of the river sound in the silence of the night,
the mountains shadow the light upon the water
The animals of the night are spellbound
As Mother Nature collects the light from moon
and gently breaths it’s creamy light
from sea to shining sea
And she throws loves lotus atilatl high into the sky,
ascending above the mountains
and back again like a burning boomerang
As everyone falls asleep down below,
and the sweet smell of the flower fills the air
Filling everyone with sweet dreams of love and fanatsy
Emerald light from the enchanted eyes of Mother Nature
bleeds into the water and gives life
to everything of sound and spirit
Frost and slush beside the riverbed sparkles
with millions of small diamonds of the rough,
shimmering rainbow rays paint the mountains with a face
Shadows of these lovely dreams fill the evening sky with beauty,
as love and desires flow gently with the soft autumn breeze
Healing brittle branches and hollow hearts everywhere,
as lunar kisses spreads happiness and amends
As the break of dawn begins to blink across the mountains,
Mother Nature collects leftover magic of these dreams
As she blows a kiss to the moon,
and she makes herself at home in the sensual eyes of the lotus flower beside a stream in spring
And the cotton moon slowly fades behind the canvas of day,
and the sun shines a signal of a brand new day
As the moon watches everyone wake replenished and cheerful
as she blows invisible lunar kisses
through the colorful flame of day


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-27-2002 10:38 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-27 10:39 PM


Beautiful Noah!  Seems the moon has worked it's magic on a lot of poets tonight!  This one is wonderful.  Enjoyed so much tonight!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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2 posted 2002-02-27 10:42 PM


Love this picture Noah!
Often times you leave me spellbound by your words.  
Wonderful writing~

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3 posted 2002-02-27 11:01 PM


Noah - It seems this full moon tonight is inspiring many writers here tonight, and I am glad, because this was very good.

Dave

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4 posted 2002-02-27 11:12 PM


You are very talented i'm really enjoying reading your work.
Lia

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5 posted 2002-02-27 11:29 PM


what an enchanting descriptive piece, much enjoyed, Noah


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6 posted 2002-02-28 02:13 AM


Noah - you write so descriptively that I feel as if I'm there.. Lovely write...

BC

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7 posted 2002-02-28 01:22 PM


I have seen a womans face glow with the moonlight and her eyes reflect it's enchanted touch.

paladin

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8 posted 2002-03-03 12:00 PM


Awwwwwwww, you are so so sweet, I hope I can dance with you under the stars this summer! Love you!

Love,
Your gwenevere

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9 posted 2002-03-03 09:29 AM


Nicely done, Noah - I particularly like your finale...
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10 posted 2002-03-03 09:32 AM


These are some beautiful lines Noah.
"Healing brittle branches and hollow hearts everywhere,
as lunar kisses spreads happiness and amends"
Lady moon, I love this indeed, great expression. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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11 posted 2002-03-03 06:27 PM


Noah, you know I love this, especially these lines.
"Mother Nature collects leftover magic of these dreams
As she blows a kiss to the moon"

Sandra

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