Open Poetry #19 |
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As We Play |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Greet my smile from ear to ear Take my hand, and join me here Skip the ropes that hang you up Drink the drops of loving cup In the prone to see the blue Snuggle up in passion's dew Nuzzle of the morning rose Wind swept hair and sandy toes Spin the yarns of days before Hide and seek upon the shore Catch the fireflies now at dusk Glistening oils and perfume musk Worry not upon the beach Dripped in juices pink and peach Roll upon the grasses green Count the stars of cresting scream Greet my step and run with me Find the trade winds light and free Sing the songs and dance the beats Nibbled ears and summer sweets Join me in these escapades Bubbles light upon the waves Candle glow and fire gaze Playing in romantic ways Copyright Kkh 2/27/02 |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Kathleen You have masterfully captured the pure essence of all things romantic and I applaud you for such exquisite writing. I can't wait to read more of your work. Take care........Sue Suetang |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like the sing of this song so sweet and it just bounces along so sing me a bit then sing some more while I sit here upon your floor. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I like this very much ![]() |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Greet my step and run with me Find the trade winds light and free Sing the songs and dance the beats Nibbled ears and summer sweets Join me in these escapades Bubbles light upon the waves Candle glow and fire gaze Playing in romantic ways" ![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...I love this so much, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always spark a flame of inspiration and tender love across these pages! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sounds like the perfect day! ![]() Your poetry is such a pleasure to read. |
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Lia Fail Member
since 2002-02-26
Posts 80 |
I really enjoyed this one!!! lia |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Greet my step and run with me Find the trade winds light and free Sing the songs and dance the beats Nibbled ears and summer sweets Join me in these escapades Bubbles light upon the waves Candle glow and fire gaze Playing in romantic ways ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Kathleen...If I had to choose two stanzas, these would be my favourite...but, then again...I love them all. I especially love the way this piece mades me feel. Happy!! ![]() Thank you for this one! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - like your writings, smooth, rhythmic, and flowing.. 'Join me in these escapades Bubbles light upon the waves Candle glow and fire gaze Playing in romantic ways' I find this very romantic... BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
playing romantically..a favorite thing to do..especially in candlights glow nice *s M |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
This Diamond darling. This simply soars with delight, wonderful writing darling utterly utterly wonderful. The flow and the rhythm in this is perfect well done you write excellently. Nothing is better than playing with delight and romance ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy ![]() ![]() To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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