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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 2003-07-01 09:20 AM


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Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
1 posted 2003-07-01 09:21 AM


Attired in a black legacy
covered with cold rain
hiding infinite lightnings
of olive-green revolutions
of lifelong existence
amongst changing seasons
escaping paralysis
and fighting inertia

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2003-07-01 08:06 PM


I love your new picture!!!


Thank you for helping out with this. I can be read many different ways...an interesting form poem Sudhir!

Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 2003-07-02 10:27 AM


Thanks a lot Sharon ...

methinks, sometimes words are so jumbled that they pop out like crosswords and one can mix and match them to suit whatever he/she wants to get out of them...

Regards
Sudhir

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4 posted 2003-07-13 01:47 PM


Yeek... I've seen this style before and it intimidates and confuses me.  Haha...

Fighting inertia is a cool concept.  Without it, we probably wouldn't have this wonderful place called piptalk, huh?  

Nicely done, my friend... something I'd never be able to accomplish myself (I'm too old-fashioned with my writing), but nonetheless something I can appreciate.  Anything that takes a good amount of work and time invested like this, is worthy of praise.

Parasite

Poets are the unacknowledged legislators of the world.
~Percy Bysshe Shelley

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