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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2002-09-04 04:15 PM


Witch's sip of starlight
gave birth to moonlit pond.
Witch's sip of cold air
brought color to what dawned.

Witch's sip of dead leaf
placed green among the ground.
Witch's sip of briar
spelled roses by their sounds.

Witch's sip on lattice
sat spiders on the glass.
Witch's sip on gravestone
gave name to a new past.

Deosil.
Windershins.
Exeunt.
Avant.

The preceding was inspired by a serenity challenge. I did one for Whip stitch, but brian sites, in his response, changed it (intentionally) to Witch's sip. So here's that, too.  

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (09-04-2002 04:32 PM).]

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-09-04 04:25 PM


you DO know, that I am going to consider this MINE---hand on hip, toe-tapping with *winks* oh yes...I'm PRINTING this one...

(I just came across that "special book" I started a couple of years ago...this one is a must have for that...a tip of the chalice for this beautiful depth of understanding.

Blessed be, indeed.

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-09-04 04:34 PM


Glad you enjoyed it, Serenity. It's good to keep witches happy. Can I make that into a t-shirt?

Seriously, I'm glad you enjoyed, friend.

Mike

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (09-04-2002 04:41 PM).]

Alicat
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3 posted 2002-09-04 06:11 PM


This is very good. I'm sure my dad would really enjoy it...pity he doesn't do email.

Alicat

bsquirrel
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4 posted 2002-09-04 06:12 PM


Pity, mine does.

Thank you, Alicat.

Mike

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